Well, I feel compelled to take a slightly different approach. Like most, I don't like the look. However, I do think you did a good job of attaining the look you desired. When I first saw it I thought to myself, "self, that thing looks like someone drug it down the highway behind their vehicle all day". The only person you need to make happy is you. The nice thing about the rattle can jobs is they are easy to do and easy to change until you get it the way you want it.