I don't care whether you pull the trigger fast or slow, nothing should be "crunchy". If there's a catch at the end just before the sear releases the hammer, something's not right with the engagement of the sear and the hammer.
I cleaned up an MIM 642 following Jerry Kuhnhausen's instructions in his S&W revolver book - just lightly polishing the primary contact points but staying away from the hammer hooks & sear. (polishing being taking off high points - NOT getting a smooth, shiny surface) Trigger pull went from over 12 pounds down to 11 something, and all of the grittiness disappeared. I'd had the gun for over 10 years and had shot it plenty before fixing it.
If there are rough spots through the trigger pull, there may be grit and/or rough spots on the contact surfaces of the rebound slide, the edges of the hand may still be too sharp (stay away from the top of the hand though!), etc.
Bottom line, I'd either take it back to the gunsmith who did your "action job" or find a gunsmith who knows what he's doing. Lube in the right places may help, but "crunchy" and "gritty" won't be fixed by oil or grease, not in the long-term anyway.