Great article. All the time and thought you put into it and some one is critical of a sentence or a paragraph break. Give me and you a break.
Thank you and more like this please
He's submitting this for consideration by an editor. Professional writing is very demanding.
For over 30 years, I wrote professionally for gun and other magazines. I can tell you, editors who pay out cash for material are usually very demanding. Minor errors can easily result in a rejection or a story being sent back to the author for corrections...often with scathing editorial comments.
And writing a book is even more demanding. One has to remember everything in prior chapters, lest he write something that conflicts. Selling a novel is about as chancy as becoming a successful actor or singer.
If the text had been allowed to stand as was, sharp-eyed readers would have challenged the part about the Thompson being more common by the time of the Korean War.
And the other member's comment about a long paragraph would have been noted by an editor and either "fixed" or sent back for improvement.
Col. Chas. Askins told me that readers are far more likely to write to an editor if they see something to complain about than if they like a story. And if you read a book where the author thanks all the friends and secretaries who helped him to proofread it or made other suggestions, you'll have an idea of just how difficult professional writing is.
Spelling knives as "knifes" won't get you kicked off of a gun forum, Lord knows. But if an editor saw a prospective writer do that, he'd have the same reaction as you, when a cop, presumably had when you saw a felony in progress.
I was present when another writer misspelled "gauge" in an article for, The Dallas Morning news. He wrote "guage" instead of "gauge." The editor said some things that showed full contempt and rejected the article. I was then writing a gun column and other free-lance material for the outdoors page and other areas of the newspaper and I took that to heart. I didn't want to be the next poor soul who made an error like that.
John asked for help and he got it, for free. There was no intention to nit-pick or denigrate either him or his material.
BTW, "someone" is just one word.